WindSong
...that phraseless melody*
So supple beneath me
the wind
a kiss full of freedom's
laugh
folding love and joy a-
round me
a thousand peacock feathers
soft
dance upon my skin
fluttering
the wind sighs in hymns
adoring
the cool caress enters
glows blood orange warm
inside me
hues of golden love
commitment
there will always be the wind
crushed violet and jasmine
whispering my body and soul ...
Cynthia M.
*Emily Dickinson XXIV
28 comments:
This poem sounds very visual.
beautiful!
Hi Malgorzata, thank you for
visiting!
Hello Shadow, thank you so much!
A thousand peacock feathers, an awesome feeling that would be, quite a picture too. All the best- LL
This poem is so light and sensual. A lovely read!
Hi LL. hmmm...yes wouldn't that be
an awesome feeling, thanks for
the visit!
Hi Catherine, I thought it was time
for a light, sensual poem thank you so much for the award and your
sincere and continual support.
I love you!
This one touches on all the senses. I can hear it (hymns), feel it (feathers), see it and smell it (Jasmine). Fabulous.
As always, a fantastic imagery here!!! Very beautiful too!!!
"there will always be the wind
crushed violet and jasmine
whispering my body and soul" - This line resonates in me mind for long!!!
Keep writing!!!
Hi Aggie, thank you, your comments
are wonderful to read, the way
you take the time to experience
my poetry.
Hi there Bros. how are you my
fine and cheerful friend. Thank you so much for your visits.
Your blog, your soul-rendering,
heart felt songs are truly an
inspiration to me, as they are
to many writers I'm sure.
Fantastic imagery. A beautiful write Cynthia.
"...there will always be the wind
crushed violet and jasmine
whispering my body and soul ..." - beautiful sensual lines...
Hello Janice, thank you lovely.
Nice poem, Cynthia :)
wishes,
devika
" a kiss full of freedom's laugh...." gorgeous image
Hi you, thanks for stopping by!
Hi Annie, yeah, it's so much fun
to laugh fully and freely. Thank
you for coming by to visit!
Oh it is so pretty in here now.
And your words: Are so pretty too.
So many beautiful lines within and the whole just calms me.Well done, you.Just what I needed. Thanking, you.
Crushed violet and jasmine....an explosion for the senses....Lovely
Linda
Very sensual in its content, visuals as well as its title. Love it all, Cynthia!
ps I have a thing about the wind, always have...
~Calli
Hi Sarah, happy to hear you find this little blog of mine more
inviting, I needed a change. And
thrilled to know this poem calms
you, Sarah, you have made my night
by letting me know - Thank you.
Hi Linda, wow, that's what I like
to hear sweet Lady.
Hi Calli, your comment almost slipped past me. Oh yes the wind!
One of the most sensual as well
as spiritual creatures Mother Nature has created. Thank you!
Mesmerizing Ethereal...(Hugs)Indigo
Thank you, precious Indigo.
lovely
Hi Kai sweetest, thank you for your
visit - Love, Cynthia.
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