Saturday, August 1, 2009

Poemflesh

haiku


baptismal rain
dapples petasl fell to ground
bruised angels



cynthia

22 comments:

Shadow said...

excellent this one!

Cynthia said...

Hi Shadow, thank you!

SarahA said...

Oh such a beauty of one; you.

Danni said...

It's lovely. :)

Michelle Johnson said...

bruised angels is a great line. your picture so vivid and inviting. have a great day.

Cynthia said...

Thank you, sweet Sarah.

Cynthia said...

Thank you, Danni.

Cynthia said...

Hi there Michelle, thank you
so much!

anonant said...

A bruised angel!
Wow!
The image here is strong.
peace

Cynthia said...

Hi Annonant, thank you. I can't
click onto your link to read
your poems.

dani sulu said...

why sad stories brings joy to the readers,
why delicate poems bind strongly to the fans,
why unfilfilled dreams weave the fulfilled dreams of writer,
why poems written in such delicate styles are so strong and engrossing, cynthia?

Cynthia said...

Hello Dani, possibly the melancholy
poem hits an emotional chord with
people/ readers, especially readers
who are poetically inclined.

If a poem doesn't "blow the top
of your head off" or "strangle
you with words", there is no
burst of understanding of an
echo within your soul.

I think certain poetry just allows
us to think beyond-

Quotes: Emily Dickinson, Langston
Hughes.

Thank you for your thoughtful
comments Dani.

Calli said...

Very lovely, Cynthia. "bruised angels"...so profound.

...and when do we get to see the lovely jewelry that you design? I would love to see what you create! They have to be amazing pieces, I just know it.

~Calli

Cynthia said...

Hi Calli! I feel many of us are
bruised angels.
Once I learn how to transfer
photographs onto the computer,
my jewelry will make a debut.
Thank you.

BLACK AND WHITE said...

Beautiful haiku! Wow!

Cynthia said...

Hello B&W, thank you. Your blog
is exquisite.

Christina said...

This takes my breath away. So beautiful.

Cynthia said...

Thank you so much Christina. I loved reading your exceptional poetry on you blog.

Devika said...

Wow!
very nice Cynthia :)

wishes,
devika

Cynthia said...

Hi Devika, thank you & thanks so
much for visiting.

Brosreview said...

Brilliant! This is beautiful! Keep writing!!!

Cynthia said...

Thanks A.J.!