A clever haiku.
I feel that transparency is a gift. To share sadness, or any emotion, helps others to see they are not alone in theirs. It breaks down barriers and assumptions. Creates victories...yes!
Yes! I say, yes!sombre sobriquets
Very well said..turning sadness in to something beautiful..aha..
Thank you, Anthony.
W & W you are so right. Transparency is a gift and alsotakes bravery - and benefits others. Thank you.
Thank you GT.
Hi Ramesh, thank you.
Beautiful and true. Great awareness.
Please excuse, butwow!This surely provides many thoughts; and yes, sharing weight surely makes it less. Impressed, impressed. Thank you.daily athens
SadnessIs notLike a poisonI believeIt is moreA bitter bitter fruitThat mustBe eaten forThe necessary nourishmentIt provides....Shared sadness is enriching and proof we are possessed of hearts. :) Nice!
Beautiful words...I liked your take on this prompt.
This is really an interesting haiku.Teresa
Thank you, Sherry.
Hello P. Thanks you so much foryour comments.
So true, Anonant, sadness lets usknow we have a loving heart.Thank you for your insightfulwords.
Thank you, Sweetest.
Hi Teresa, Thank you!
To make of sadness a tool. An ice pick, perhaps.
Yes, yes, yes. Beautiful!
Lovely words and a beautiful thoughts too.
Hello dear Sandy, thank you!
Thank you so much, Nanka.
compact and compelling piece.
yes it does...lots to think about with that one!
Thank you, Jingle!
Hi Patti, thank you & yes!
liked this a lot cynthia!but not the real thought of sadness, it's how you rendered it! ;-)
Thank you Amity, what a thoughtfulcompliment.
I like hiaku's. I haven't written any lately though.
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A clever haiku.
I feel that transparency is a gift. To share sadness, or any emotion, helps others to see they are not alone in theirs. It breaks down barriers and assumptions. Creates victories...yes!
Yes! I say, yes!
sombre sobriquets
Very well said..turning sadness in to something beautiful..aha..
Thank you, Anthony.
W & W you are so right. Transparency is a gift and also
takes bravery - and benefits others. Thank you.
Thank you GT.
Hi Ramesh, thank you.
Beautiful and true. Great awareness.
Please excuse, but
wow
!
This surely provides many thoughts; and yes, sharing weight surely makes it less. Impressed, impressed. Thank you.
daily athens
Sadness
Is not
Like a poison
I believe
It is more
A bitter bitter fruit
That must
Be eaten for
The necessary nourishment
It provides....
Shared sadness is enriching and proof we are possessed of hearts. :) Nice!
Beautiful words...I liked your take on this prompt.
This is really an interesting haiku.
Teresa
Thank you, Sherry.
Hello P. Thanks you so much for
your comments.
So true, Anonant, sadness lets us
know we have a loving heart.
Thank you for your insightful
words.
Thank you, Sweetest.
Hi Teresa, Thank you!
To make of sadness a tool. An ice pick, perhaps.
Yes, yes, yes. Beautiful!
Lovely words and a beautiful thoughts too.
Hello dear Sandy, thank you!
Thank you so much, Nanka.
compact and compelling piece.
yes it does...lots to think about with that one!
Thank you, Jingle!
Hi Patti, thank you & yes!
liked this a lot cynthia!
but not the real thought of sadness, it's how you rendered it! ;-)
Thank you Amity, what a thoughtful
compliment.
I like hiaku's. I haven't written any lately though.
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