Saturday, September 17, 2011

pray bliss come

In our window
is a whisper
of loveliness
untold

Warm hands
seduce my timidity
imprison each breath-less denial

Your love for me:
a birdsong sifting sky
across this meadow.

Cynthia

28 comments:

Heaven said...

Like the images of that whisper across the meadow ~

Cynthia said...

Hi Heaven thank you and goodnight.

Kalyan said...

lovely words...beautifully crafted lines!

Deborah said...

Oooh, this is just BEAUTIFUL!

Claudia said...

...a birdsong sifting sky
across this meadow....this is such a peaceful image

Paige said...

A whisper of a poem.

Cynthia said...

Thank you for the generous compliments Kalyan.

Cynthia said...

Thank you, Deborah!

Cynthia said...

Hi Claudia, happy to know you felt
the peace of that line. Thank you.

Cynthia said...

Yes, Paige, I love romantic whispers.

urban butterfly said...

beautiful lines and imagery! I can definitely relate to this piece. :)

Cynthia said...

Thank you Butterfly, great to see
you again.

B M said...

.....so soft and gentle.


Thank you for dropping in at my blog and leaving me your trail and words.

BM

Blasphemous Aesthete said...

The winds of love billow soft and gentle.Lovely post.


Cheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete

Cynthia said...

Thank you BM for visiting and for
your kind comments.

Cynthia said...

Hi BA, thank you very much for your
gentle comment.

S. said...

Beautiful.

Love
/S / http:// mydarlingsolitude.blogspot.com

Cynthia said...

Thank you, so much S.

Jason said...

Just wow!

Cynthia said...

Thank you very much, Jason!

Niya said...

beautiful piece of work :)

Cynthia said...

Niya, thank you for your kind
words, this poem just flowed out
of me.

Night.

Short Poems said...

Beautiful words, thanks for sharing with us!

Warmly
Marinela

Cynthia said...

Marinela [pretty name] you are so
welcome!

Sheila Moore said...

I love these lines especially - seduce my timidity
imprison each breath-less denial

Cynthia said...

Sheila, those words just wrote themselves from my heart.

Thank you!

Marion Williams-Bennett said...

this is poem gave me the feeing of fingers gentling trailing along my skin...so delicate, so intense.

Lovely writing!

Cynthia said...

Good Morning, Marion. I'm thrilled
that this poem made you feel like fingers trailing along your skin.
A I wrote her, I felt this amazing breeze caressing me.

Thank you!