Drowsy in late winter. My soul shivers and sighs. Stoking my spiritual center Drowsy in late winter. Listening to my Muse, my mentor. I kiss the blues goodbye. Drowsy in late winter. My soul shivers and sighs.
Hi Teresa, glad you noticed. For me there is a repetitive nature to winter, esp. in the East Coast, that can lull one into comfort or melancholy, which can open positive reflection. Thank you!
I agree with you about a book of poems for children. Most of my poems would fall into that genre. Maybe, I need to put some of them together and print them into book form. Sounds like a plan to me. ; ))
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now I shiver and sigh ...
Hi Shauna, thank you for poppin' in.
Beautiful poem! Thank you for your kind comment. I appreciate your sentiments.
Hi Ayala, thank you!
I love this. The alliteration and repetition really emphasizes the personality of winter.
What's the cure for a shivering, sighing soul?
Soul Opening
Hi Teresa, glad you noticed. For me there is a repetitive nature
to winter, esp. in the East Coast,
that can lull one into comfort
or melancholy, which can open
positive reflection. Thank you!
Hi MMt. Well, there is no cure needed. I find sighing to be
liberating and comforting.
Good you said goodbye to blues. Beautiful rhyme.
Hello Harshad - Thank you!
It sounds like under the drowsy exterior, the spirit within is about ready to awake. :)
very hopeful message behind this piece. hope the upcoming spring can continue to beat the winter blues.
Yes, Ravenblack, the spirit within is being restored and ready to make an appearence.
Thank you!
Hi Jade, thank you so much. Today is very wonderful and sunny and
there is also a lot of snow.
I wish it was our late winter here. Lovely prose.
beautiful words!!
Thank you, Sandra!
Hey that's a beautiful verse :-)
Wonderful!
Cheers!
Thank you so much Dreamz.
Hello BA, thank you!
Drowsy in late winter.
I long for early Spring.
Thanks for your visit and encouraging comments.
I agree with you about a book of poems for children. Most of my poems would fall into that genre. Maybe, I need to put some of them together and print them into book form. Sounds like a plan to me. ; ))
This is so beautifully penned, dear Cynthia! I especially loved the 'stroking my spiritual center' :-)
Thanks so much for visiting my blog and blessing me with lovely feedback :-)
I'm sorry Daydreamer, missed your
post. Thank you and many sweet
dreams.
Hi GigiAnn, your most welcome -
I enjoyed your blog. Good luck
on your children's book.
Hello Princess! Thank you, and I found your blog to be a lovely
place.
wow! liked it..
Hello there, Mith. Thank You!
-My Muse My Mentor-
An inspiring,
Example,
A light in,
The early morn,
An answer,
To a question,
I did,
Not know,
To ask,
But,
From your heart,
I learn...
:)
peace
Oh Anonant, this is the most touching, lovely comment I can
recall reading in a very long time.
Thank You!
A muse is,
In the words,
We use,
To light,
the fuse,
Of our,
Collective,
Expressive hearts.
When one's words touches another's heart or mind it is always a special event.
Shiver and sigh indeed.. :)
peace
Anonant, you are an angel. Thank you, very much for enjoying my poetry and letting me know.
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